Commentary Writing

Unfair Pay to Women

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  1. UnknownNovember 3, 2017 at 7:32 AM

    I definitely agree with the statement you are trying to express! This is a well organized story but it would've been more easier to understand if you made your opinion more clear and restated it throughout the story. I really enjoyed reading this! Keep up the great stories!

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